My Wednesday holiday
On Wednesday I went to Judges bay.Leva my brother was driving.I walked to the beach like a cool lion walking in the forest.My brother bombed and he had a sore gluties maximus and we observed it like an x-ray.When he went back in he was kicking the water because it really hurt.When we went home we met my sister who thinks she is the queen of us.Zadie my cousin was at our house playing with my sister Leka.Pop! her balloon popped and then we went sleep.
Nice work I dont really get why he was in the water kicking when he was hurt and maybe you could improve it or make it a bit more longer
ReplyDeleteNice work I dont really get why he was in the water kicking when he was hurt and maybe you could improve it or make it a bit more longer
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